Week 6 Post 4: Revelation

Decided to pull some Storymatic cards and even decided to do it properly. So if done properly, you actually pull 4 cards to use for your prompts, and the character cards build your main character. The cards I pulled were “person with wings,” “person who should not be in charge,” “shocking announcement,” and “safety deposit box.”

I feel there is a lot that is kind of unsatisfying about it but it skewed a bit longer than I wanted to write. Not too bad for an hour’s plunking and 15 minutes of edits, I suppose. Anyhow, here’s some bullshit:


          Everyone thought he was special because he had wings. He was born with them – a strange modern miracle. Scientists wanted to study him but his mother would never allow it. They had noticed the strange wing-like appendages during the ultrasounds. She was single, very young, claimed it was a virgin birth and that there was no mortal father. That she had consorted only with angels. She began wearing clothes that resembled nun’s habits, preferring tones of black and purest white, and kept her hair covered. She kept her eyes downcast, her hands clasped gently in front. She spoke softly and smiled sweetly. Everyone that knew her before remembered something very different. But when your child is born with pure white wings, it is easy for those rumors to fall by the wayside.

          The religious fervor was instant. Passionate preachers and pastors, some from very renowned mega churches, instantly hailed the child as divinely significant. The messiah, the second coming, the king of kings. She traveled often, so that his followers could see him in person. The pictures of his infancy always reflect this – a bundled babe, held in the arms of a girl that seemed much too young, with hands reaching to touch his holiness. His mother always smiled, always seemed to have eyes only for him, like a painting of the Mother Mary. The onlookers and true believers gasped and cried tears of joy to be in his presence.

          The more notorious pictures and videos were of his mother holding him on stage, his bare back facing the crowds. Sometimes his wings fluttered on their own. Sometimes someone else would hold the tip of one, spreading the span of it out for the crowd to see as the boy wriggled and cried.


          The less religious often wondered if it was a sign of a change in human genetics – a mutation, like out of a comic book origin story. But there was a distinct lack of other examples. Even as the years passed and he aged, grew from infancy to childhood, there were no other winged babes. Scientists pleaded and begged for a chance to take a little bit of blood or a swab of saliva, but his mother always refused. She also refused media visits and interviews. She kept him secluded, in the mansion of one particular pastor who she held in high regard. He was home schooled. He was not allowed internet access, and his mother had expunged most of her own social media history, deleted every account across every platform. People were paid to silence old tales of her life before his birth. It was a wonder what could be cleared away with money. What he was taught, what he thought, what he might share with the world could only be guessed at. But the true believers waited patiently, knowing only that it would be great.


          The years passed and he was mostly forgotten, locked away in that mansion. The especially favored amongst his flock were allowed to visit, though they were suspiciously wealthy and it was suspected they paid their way in. They signed NDAs for the privilege and never spoke to anyone of what they saw or heard during their time in the mansion. He was supposedly hale and hearty, kind, and well educated. What little was shared with the public was that when he was of age, he intended to make strides in leadership positions. That he would change the world.

          His 18th birthday came and passed with no change. The world still saw and heard very little directly from him, beyond the occasional picture of a pale, dark haired youth in bulky cloaks. There was the occasional rumor in the town near the mansion of a winged man flying overheard, but those often proved to just be tall tales. He was so rarely seen that many believed him to be dead. The media and the scientists made fewer and fewer requests to meet with him and even his church of true believers grew smaller. Many joked amongst themselves – so much for the messiah. So much for a new leader.


          When he turned 37, it was announced that he would be running for president of the United States that year. His true believers rejoiced, but everyone else was shocked. He had never held any political office, had never had a job, had never attended a school. He had never even spoken in public. Was he even remotely prepared for such an important role?

          The political rallies were even worse – they were secluded and private affairs. They didn’t allow media coverage, which seemed to go against good sense. How could people vote for a candidate that wasn’t getting his words out to the public? There were pictures of him flooding the internet and the media now, and the people that attended the rallies spoke with delirious devotion to him. He was handsome – tall, with a well chiseled jaw and striking sky-blue eyes. He had well coifed jet-black hair. He was thin, almost waifish.

And the wings. Brilliant white wings.

          His tailored suits were cut to allow the full spread of his wings. It certainly made him appear angelic. And it turned out they weren’t just for show, because he could fly. He flew at every rally. His mother and the pastor seemed to be all the voice he needed. Those that attended these private rallies spoke very little about his policies or his politics. His true believers cried with joy as they spread the word of what wonderful changes he would make for the world, and many other devoted religious individuals found themselves swayed by the possibility.

          His popularity rocketed, even amongst non-believers, who simply enjoyed the spectacle. Many liked the idea of a strange third-party candidate that was somehow trouncing the usual two picks. He smiled handsomely enough from magazine covers and social media memes to win over frivolous hearts.

          He won the presidency in a landslide. A first for a third-party candidate.


          Nobody thought there would be any harm. After all, if he was a good person, he would try his best and possibly even get a little good done. And if he was ineffectual, then certainly the system of checks and balances in place would keep him from fudging the entire thing too badly. And many suspected that a strange and mutated societal cut-off would be nothing but that – completely ineffectual. A joke of a presidency, during which time nothing might change, but at least nothing bad would happen. At worst, the world would laugh at them a little and things would go on as they always had.

          Nobody suspected that he would purposely set out to dismantle and destroy it all.


          The survivors studied it for years after. It was hard to find the favored that had signed NDAs, hard to find the tutors that might have taught the boy before he was the man that ruined the world. It was hard to find a reason for WHY, though it was a question often on everyone’s minds. As those that remained rebuilt the world piece by piece from it sundering, they had few answers. His life, his origins, his entire being was a mystery.

          One day, while sifting through the remains and records of a bank, a young historian found a safety deposit box listed as belonging to the mother. With great care, he opened it, hands trembling. Whatever he found inside would be historically significant. Even if it was nothing, but he hoped for an answer – finally an answer.

          Inside was a single slip of paper. He unfolded it. A strange script scrawled across the paper in a language he could not read. The letters glowed strangely bright as if lit within by the fires of hell, and before his very eyes the script faded – along with his vision. As he cried out for help, he dropped the paper, though it held very little of interest anymore. His colleagues found only a mostly blank page. Remaining at the bottom was the signature of the mother.

Little Star

The cards for this one were: teenager, and garage sale.


              It had been a boring summer for Tim. They had just moved to a new town, so he didn’t have any local friends yet, and his mom’s new job had her working nights, so she didn’t want him playing games in the house while she slept. Apparently even with the headset on, he yelled too much and too loud, and after the first week of summer he had been banned from touching his game systems until after 4 pm when she was awake. Instead, he spent his days riding around on his bike, exploring the nearby neighborhoods.

              This town didn’t have straightforward streets. Instead of blocks laid out in easy to navigate squares, the roads looped and twisted, sometimes creating a detour from a main street threading through the entire neighborhood, only to return to that very same street. Or occasionally they ended in dead ends and cul-de-sacs. It made navigating hard and he had gotten turned around several times.

              Still, some degree of backtracking could get him home, and he always had his phone in his pocket, so he never felt truly lost. He found as fascinating as it was stupid, and he enjoyed riding around to see how lost he could get.

              The neighborhood he was in now was strange. A lot of the houses looked empty with overgrown yards and dark windows. He didn’t see any cars around, which he considered strange. Moments ago he had been in a normal neighborhood, the sunlight bright, the summer greenery vibrant. There were cars parked in driveways or on the street, and he could spot people going about their business, occasionally returning his waves. The sun still shone, but somehow seemed to lack the warmth it had moments ago. The trees gave an oppressing atmosphere, and the colors all seemed muted here.

              He considered turning around when he finally spotted a few cars ahead, and some stuff piled in front of one of the houses. Riding closer in curiosity, he recognized it as a garage sale. The garage door was open, and the person running the garage sale (an ancient woman with curly white hair, sitting in a plastic outdoor chair and wearing sunglasses and a straw hat, white slacks and a floral blouse) sat in the shade just inside, tables set up in her driveway. A few people poked around at the contents of the sale.

              Tim rode up and dropped his bike on the grass at the edge of the driveway. He walked through, glancing at the items on display. He hadn’t brought any money with him, but he loved poking around yard sales and seeing what people had decided to toss out. He loved second-hand stores for the same reason – everything there was something with history. Some of it was quite normal – books with yellowing paper and broken spines, an assortment of clothes. Some of it was a little bizarre. Trinkets and decorations of a macabre sort – skulls, crystals, and taxidermied animals. He glanced up at the old woman running the sale, sitting so still that he wondered if she was even awake. Or even alive. He couldn’t imagine her being the sort to own items like this, and tried to imagine where they had come from.  Did they belong to children who had grown and moved away and left their juvenile gothic obsessions behind?

              One particular item caught his eye. A little keepsake box, shaped like a pirate’s chest. He studied the intricate designs on it for several moments, lifting it to get a good view of all sides. It was heavy, and he knew it wasn’t empty because he could feel objects shifting inside. He popped the latch on the front of it and pushed the lid up. Inside were little pieces of glinting black stone – shaped like stars, small grooves decorating and accentuating their shapes.

              They were fascinating. He wished he had brought some money. He set the little chest back down on the table, poking at the contents within, and felt a sudden sharp pinprick of pain. He pulled his hand up to see a small bead of blood welling on a fingertip. Popping his finger into his mouth, he glanced up to see that the people in the garage sale had nearly cleared out. One man was pulling away in his truck, and the last remaining shopper besides him (a young woman) was currently speaking to the old woman (apparently less than dead), purchasing a couple of things she had found. It was hard to tell since the old woman was wearing sunglasses, but Tim was certain he wasn’t being observed for the moment.

              He felt compelled to quickly slip one single star into his palm, then deposited it into his pocket and closed the small chest. He turned and walked back to his bike. Once on his bike, he pedaled away, not daring to look back over his shoulder in case the guilt of the moment was plain on his face.

              He backtracked along the way he had come in. It was getting to be later in the afternoon, and he wanted to get back home to AC and XBOX, so he went relatively fast. Still, the quiet, empty neighborhood seemed to stretch further than he remembered. Annoyed, he stood on his pedals and leaned over the handles, pushing forward like he was in a race.

              Just ahead, he saw a familiar woman walk to a car, and quickly pull away from the curb. His jaw dropped as he slowed, staring at the garage sale as he coasted by it. The old woman was still seated there, barely acknowledging his presence.

              He stopped just past her house. He turned and looked back. Yes, it was the same place, the same sale laid out on the same driveway, the same old lady in sunglasses and floral sitting just inside the garage. Had he somehow gotten turned around so bad that he had looped back around completely? Starting down the street again, he decided to follow a different route than he had moments before.

              Before he knew it, he saw the tables in the driveway and found himself coasting by the house again. He frowned hard, staring at the house as he passed it. What was going on? He had taken a completely different route that time and had still ended up in the same destination. He stopped and pulled his phone out, to pull up a map and see if it would pinpoint his position on it.

              He frowned at his phone’s dark screen, furiously mashed at the buttons he knew would boot it up if it had somehow completely shut down. Nothing happened. He had completely charged his phone before leaving home, and finding it dead and useless now felt wrong. In fact, everything about this felt wrong.

              Frowning back at the old woman, like maybe she had somehow caused this, he balanced back on his bike and took off again.

              This time it took a little longer, but soon the garage sale came into sight again. He stopped well before he even saw the woman sitting just inside her garage. Someone else had arrived and was poking around at the items. He decided to wait to see if he could follow them on their way out of this neighborhood. He balanced on his bike, shifting his weight from one side to the other in boredom as he waited for the person to finish looking and climb back into his car. The man started the engine and pulled away from the curb, and Tim followed along behind, not bothering to look at the house or the woman or the sale.

              He never fell behind or lost sight of the car. Instead it was like it vanished from thin air. He came to a halt, his jaw dropping as he stared. Then carefully, slowly, he biked forward, waiting to see if he passed through something too, but there was nothing – no unexplained portal, nothing strange that he could see. Just regular space.

              He continued slowly, his stomach churning with dread at what he knew he would see soon. And sure enough, just ahead – the familiar tables came into sight.

              He stopped and dropped his bike where he had left it the previous time, and approached the woman timidly. It was the only thing he could think of to free him from this. He fished in his pocket for the strange stone star. “Ma’am,” he said morosely, holding the small dark shape out to her in his open palm. “I’m sorry I took this. I think I need to return it.”

              He could see his hand reflected in the sunglasses. For a moment, he wasn’t certain she was going to respond, but suddenly she gasped and reached out, gently folding his hand around the star instead of taking it from him. “Oh my, that wasn’t supposed to be out here,” she said, standing and walking out to the table in the carefully measured steps of the elderly. He watched in dumbfounded confusion as she picked up the little chest carefully, holding it close to herself before turning around to walk back to him. “Did you feed it blood?” she asked.

              Tim thought about the pinprick on his finger, the small drop of blood. He didn’t think any had dropped into the chest, but he wasn’t really sure. “I think… maybe?”

              “Oh, boy. Oh, child,” she said, her voice quite sad. “I’m so so sorry.”

              The feeling of alarm started to grow in Tim’s chest. “Why?” he asked.

              “I’m so sorry,” the woman repeated, opening the chest so it faced him. Tim stared, mouth agape, as he watched what was happening to him reflected in the glossy surface of the woman’s sunglasses. It was like his shape had lost its form and was swirling toward a single point. Looking down, he could see that everything about him seemed to focus on what was in his hand – the star, glowing brightly now, pulled him in.

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              Gladys carefully reached out with the open box. She knew that if she waited too long, the star would finish consuming the boy’s soul and fall to the ground, and she hated touching the things. So much risk, so many sharp edges and points if one wasn’t careful. Better to simply swipe it out of the air while it still floated. She closed the lid down around it and carefully latched the box, then carried it back into the house. She hated to leave her garage sale unattended, but this was more important. If they were awake and seeking blood, it was important to put them to sleep again.