Week 7 Post 3: Greyspace

          Mallory woke slowly. She was in a very warm, very soft bed in a bright room. Her eyelids fluttered open – everything was white. At first she wondered if she was in a hospital but it was quiet and nothing about the décor suggested an overtly clinical setting. There was no smell of cleaners or chemicals. If it was a hospital, then it was a very fancy one and the room was private – a luxury she’d never be able to afford. Strangely, it reminded her of fictional elves in those old Lord of the Rings movies. Soft curtains caught on a breeze, and the faintest sound of faraway chatter caught her ears.

          She searched her mind, trying to remember what had happened. There were flashes of terror, and she could remember the shadow, and the pain – the pain of the knife entering her back. She placed a hand just over her hip, searching for the wound, but there was nothing. Yet she distinctly remembered the way everything had continued to burn even as the knife was drawn out to bite into her flesh thrice more. She winced just thinking about it. Had that been a strange dream?

          What had happened to Eliza? And the others? She remembered the house had exploded and collapsed in on itself, and she had almost been caught in a massive fire…

          Mallory pushed herself out of bed, surprised to find that she felt perfectly fine. She was in loose fitting white clothes, light and easy to move in. Lifting her shirt and twisting, she could see the faintest of scars – five marks. More than she had remembered. She felt a chill – how long had she been laying here to be this healed? “Hello?” she called out tentatively. She knew she should probably leave the room and try to find someone, anyone, that could tell her where she was and what had happened, but the sound of distant chatter drew her to the window again.

          The curtains were sheer and white, gently fluttering in the breeze, which was pleasantly warm. Mallory pushed them aside as she approached, looking down. She was shocked to find she was at a dizzying height – almost as though she were high up on a mountain. Sprawling out below was a city built into the side and base of the mountain. It reminded her of pictures of Rio de Janeiro, haphazardly placed buildings with many winding streets and alleys. Mallory blinked as she realized there were no cars or trucks below, although she could see people moving about their business.

Week 7 Post 2: Greyspace

          There was pain and sound and the sensation of being bodily lifted into the air and crashed in debris. For a disorienting heartbeat, Mallory wondered if she was back in that moment beneath the stairs. If everything that had happened since then had been some strange dream her dying mind had conjured. Her hearing was a soft buzz, shifting to a high squeal as the sounds of the world around her shifted back into focus. There was the crackling of fire and the creak of shifting wood. Fire!? Mallory gasped, trying to open her eyes, but she hurt all over and it took effort. She pushed something off, not bothering to identify what it had once been a part of. Debris.

          It was like a bomb had gone off a floor beneath them. She pushed herself to her feet, blinking up at the night sky where a roof had once been. Smoke curled into the air, burning her lungs. She could hear people shouting outside, could hear screaming somewhere nearby. Eliza. Eliza was screaming.

          And then the screaming stopped.

          Before she could fully grasp what was happening, arms gripped her tight and pulled her, shifting her into greyspace. She blinked, reorienting herself again, staring hard at flames that burst forth and engulfed her. She pulled back, gasping, but the flames were insubstantial, grey, passing over her like smoke. The sound of Eliza screaming returned.

          The arms helped her to stand. Looking up, she saw that it was Samanda steadying her. “What happened?” Mallory asked.

          “I’m not sure. We were asleep. Sampson should have been on watch.” She stepped back from Mallory, studying her carefully as she lifted her arms away, looking ready to grab her if she looked unsteady. Once she seemed satisfied that Mallory was fine by herself, she nodded and looked down into the hole. “Stay here,” Samanda commanded. She jumped down into the hole.

          Frowning, Mallory moved to the edge, looking down. Eliza’s cries cut out again. “Fuck that,” Mallory murmured to herself, trying to find an easy path down. After a moment, she recalled her previous time in greyspace and everything they had been told about it. She took a deep breath and allowed herself to slip into the flooring beneath her.

          When it happened, she could feel the floor passing through her. She gasped, wondering how Eliza had managed to walk through a wall. As she lost her focus, the floor lost it’s hold on her and she fell, flailing wildly with a shout of surprise. The ground floor caught her – she hit it, hard, a soft “oof!” escaping her lungs.

          But the damage hadn’t come from the ground floor. It went down further. “Oh for fuck’s sake,” she grumbled to herself. This time she decided to jump. Eliza’s house had a basement, and a nice one at that – Michael had used it as his teenaged escape den often. Mallory remembered that it had been furnished with an old couch with failing springs that was almost uncomfortable to sit in, a large TV and several gaming systems. He’d also had loads of board games, a table to play them at, and a mini fridge loaded with his favorite energy drinks and sodas. The basement was such a blown in mess that Mallory couldn’t tell if any of that stuff had been left untouched by his parents. She gaped at the ruins of the basement. What had caused this?

          She could see Samanda leaning down over Isaac’s body, and started to jog over to help when she caught sight of Eliza out of the corner of her eye. She was also sprawled on the ground, still in her pajamas, one arm up over her head as though she had tried to protect herself. Mallory turned on her heel, instantly moving toward her friend instead.

          Something like the shadow of a very tall man stepped forward. At first, Mallory wasn’t sure if it was even really there. Glinting silvery eyes shifted up, narrowing as it caught sight of her. Mallory felt that same chill from the Miller house – the absolute hatred in that gaze. Her steps almost faltered as it glared at her, and then its gaze shifted down to Eliza. A blade glinted in its hands, as silvery as the eyes. Mallory found herself bending into an all-out sprint as it regarded her friend. Not Eliza! The words shrieked through her brain. Without any hesitation, Mallory tackled the shadow.

          She half expected to simply dive through it, but it was surprisingly solid to the touch, and ice cold. She hissed as she felt the chill seep into her skin, her fingers freezing so badly that she felt like her nerve endings were on fire. It grunted softly at the impact, being pushed back a few steps but not going down. It looked down at her, pulling her closer, almost as though to hug her.

          Mallory had thought touching it was unpleasant, but it was nothing compared to the searing, almost soul-wrenching pain of the knife.

Week 6 Post 4: Revelation

Decided to pull some Storymatic cards and even decided to do it properly. So if done properly, you actually pull 4 cards to use for your prompts, and the character cards build your main character. The cards I pulled were “person with wings,” “person who should not be in charge,” “shocking announcement,” and “safety deposit box.”

I feel there is a lot that is kind of unsatisfying about it but it skewed a bit longer than I wanted to write. Not too bad for an hour’s plunking and 15 minutes of edits, I suppose. Anyhow, here’s some bullshit:


          Everyone thought he was special because he had wings. He was born with them – a strange modern miracle. Scientists wanted to study him but his mother would never allow it. They had noticed the strange wing-like appendages during the ultrasounds. She was single, very young, claimed it was a virgin birth and that there was no mortal father. That she had consorted only with angels. She began wearing clothes that resembled nun’s habits, preferring tones of black and purest white, and kept her hair covered. She kept her eyes downcast, her hands clasped gently in front. She spoke softly and smiled sweetly. Everyone that knew her before remembered something very different. But when your child is born with pure white wings, it is easy for those rumors to fall by the wayside.

          The religious fervor was instant. Passionate preachers and pastors, some from very renowned mega churches, instantly hailed the child as divinely significant. The messiah, the second coming, the king of kings. She traveled often, so that his followers could see him in person. The pictures of his infancy always reflect this – a bundled babe, held in the arms of a girl that seemed much too young, with hands reaching to touch his holiness. His mother always smiled, always seemed to have eyes only for him, like a painting of the Mother Mary. The onlookers and true believers gasped and cried tears of joy to be in his presence.

          The more notorious pictures and videos were of his mother holding him on stage, his bare back facing the crowds. Sometimes his wings fluttered on their own. Sometimes someone else would hold the tip of one, spreading the span of it out for the crowd to see as the boy wriggled and cried.


          The less religious often wondered if it was a sign of a change in human genetics – a mutation, like out of a comic book origin story. But there was a distinct lack of other examples. Even as the years passed and he aged, grew from infancy to childhood, there were no other winged babes. Scientists pleaded and begged for a chance to take a little bit of blood or a swab of saliva, but his mother always refused. She also refused media visits and interviews. She kept him secluded, in the mansion of one particular pastor who she held in high regard. He was home schooled. He was not allowed internet access, and his mother had expunged most of her own social media history, deleted every account across every platform. People were paid to silence old tales of her life before his birth. It was a wonder what could be cleared away with money. What he was taught, what he thought, what he might share with the world could only be guessed at. But the true believers waited patiently, knowing only that it would be great.


          The years passed and he was mostly forgotten, locked away in that mansion. The especially favored amongst his flock were allowed to visit, though they were suspiciously wealthy and it was suspected they paid their way in. They signed NDAs for the privilege and never spoke to anyone of what they saw or heard during their time in the mansion. He was supposedly hale and hearty, kind, and well educated. What little was shared with the public was that when he was of age, he intended to make strides in leadership positions. That he would change the world.

          His 18th birthday came and passed with no change. The world still saw and heard very little directly from him, beyond the occasional picture of a pale, dark haired youth in bulky cloaks. There was the occasional rumor in the town near the mansion of a winged man flying overheard, but those often proved to just be tall tales. He was so rarely seen that many believed him to be dead. The media and the scientists made fewer and fewer requests to meet with him and even his church of true believers grew smaller. Many joked amongst themselves – so much for the messiah. So much for a new leader.


          When he turned 37, it was announced that he would be running for president of the United States that year. His true believers rejoiced, but everyone else was shocked. He had never held any political office, had never had a job, had never attended a school. He had never even spoken in public. Was he even remotely prepared for such an important role?

          The political rallies were even worse – they were secluded and private affairs. They didn’t allow media coverage, which seemed to go against good sense. How could people vote for a candidate that wasn’t getting his words out to the public? There were pictures of him flooding the internet and the media now, and the people that attended the rallies spoke with delirious devotion to him. He was handsome – tall, with a well chiseled jaw and striking sky-blue eyes. He had well coifed jet-black hair. He was thin, almost waifish.

And the wings. Brilliant white wings.

          His tailored suits were cut to allow the full spread of his wings. It certainly made him appear angelic. And it turned out they weren’t just for show, because he could fly. He flew at every rally. His mother and the pastor seemed to be all the voice he needed. Those that attended these private rallies spoke very little about his policies or his politics. His true believers cried with joy as they spread the word of what wonderful changes he would make for the world, and many other devoted religious individuals found themselves swayed by the possibility.

          His popularity rocketed, even amongst non-believers, who simply enjoyed the spectacle. Many liked the idea of a strange third-party candidate that was somehow trouncing the usual two picks. He smiled handsomely enough from magazine covers and social media memes to win over frivolous hearts.

          He won the presidency in a landslide. A first for a third-party candidate.


          Nobody thought there would be any harm. After all, if he was a good person, he would try his best and possibly even get a little good done. And if he was ineffectual, then certainly the system of checks and balances in place would keep him from fudging the entire thing too badly. And many suspected that a strange and mutated societal cut-off would be nothing but that – completely ineffectual. A joke of a presidency, during which time nothing might change, but at least nothing bad would happen. At worst, the world would laugh at them a little and things would go on as they always had.

          Nobody suspected that he would purposely set out to dismantle and destroy it all.


          The survivors studied it for years after. It was hard to find the favored that had signed NDAs, hard to find the tutors that might have taught the boy before he was the man that ruined the world. It was hard to find a reason for WHY, though it was a question often on everyone’s minds. As those that remained rebuilt the world piece by piece from it sundering, they had few answers. His life, his origins, his entire being was a mystery.

          One day, while sifting through the remains and records of a bank, a young historian found a safety deposit box listed as belonging to the mother. With great care, he opened it, hands trembling. Whatever he found inside would be historically significant. Even if it was nothing, but he hoped for an answer – finally an answer.

          Inside was a single slip of paper. He unfolded it. A strange script scrawled across the paper in a language he could not read. The letters glowed strangely bright as if lit within by the fires of hell, and before his very eyes the script faded – along with his vision. As he cried out for help, he dropped the paper, though it held very little of interest anymore. His colleagues found only a mostly blank page. Remaining at the bottom was the signature of the mother.

Week 6 Post 3: Greyspace

          It turned into quite a fun night. They ordered out for some food, and while they perused their options, Eliza was an unending litany of questions. She seemed to want to know every mundane thing there was to know about Isaac, and graciously didn’t want to let the Sams feel left out either. They discussed favorite foods, and least favorite foods. Eliza let them look over the board and card games her parents kept in the den while they discussed childhood games Isaac and the Sams played when they were younger. Eliza talked about growing up with Michael, and how she had met Mallory in elementary school. “Really? You saved her from bullies?” Isaac said with a laugh.

Mallory nodded solemnly. “It’s true. I usually tried to ignore them, but Eliza saw what was happening and screamed her head off at them.”

“And that worked?” Sampson asked.

“No,” Eliza said. She laughed, hiding her face in her hands. “It completely backfired, I just pissed them off, and they were older, way bigger, and they tried beating me up. But that’s when Mallory stepped in. She would never raise a hand to help herself against them, but she was very willing to protect someone else.”

“And you’ve been friends since?” Isaac asked. Eliza and Mallory both nodded.

Isaac was an only child, but had always had the Sams trailing as bodyguards, and grew up very close to his cousins.

          “Really? Triplets?” Eliza asked, sounding horrified as Isaac mentioned his cousins.

          “Yes, but not identical. They’re all completely different, and you’d never guess they were brothers, let alone that they shared a womb,” Isaac chuckled. “But I love them each for their eccentricities.”

          They played some games, and ate the food when it came. Then since it was still very warm for September, they played in the pool briefly before piling into the house. They took turns showering and dressing down into pajamas. They stayed up late talking.

          Sampson disappeared at some point to take his turn at watch, the only sign that anything about their presence was unusual. Mallory drifted off, leaning against Eliza as she and Isaac continued to softly talk late into the night. This actually was a lot of fun, she thought to herself briefly.

Week 6 Post 2: Greyspace

          The next week was seemingly normal to Mallory. Isaac and the Sams stopped showing up at school, though it seemed no one noticed in the slightest. Eliza said that in the classes they had shared, the teachers never mentioned them. She had managed to sneak a peek at the roster for one of her classes and their names weren’t on the list. Their desks were empty, and no one acknowledged the absence. It was as though they had never existed in the first place. Magic.

          Mallory still had to hear about them constantly. It seemed that Eliza invited them in every night, and was eager to talk about it with Mallory the next day. As the end of the week approached, Eliza reported that her parents were taking an extra-long weekend out of town, leaving her home ‘alone.’ “Did you want to come and stay over? I’m thinking of letting them know they can stay in the house as well. It’ll be really fun with all of us there, like a sleepover,” Eliza pleaded, seeing that Mallory wasn’t entirely interested.

          Mallory finally reluctantly agreed, which is how she found herself parking in Eliza’s driveway again on a Friday evening. The strange sensation of trespassing still thrummed in her stomach. Eliza opened the door as she approached, obviously waiting for her arrival. “Are they inside?” Mallory asked as the door shut behind her.

          Eliza shook her head. “No, not yet.” She watched Mallory’s gaze drift down the pictures hanging in the front hallway and linger on Michael’s senior pics from high school. “He’s doing well in college so far,” she said.

          Mallory flushed and nodded, quickly looking away. “Well, he was always pretty smart.” Eliza smirked knowingly, and Mallory grimaced – her crush on Michael had never been well hidden. Instead of saying anything though, Eliza turned and led her into the house. She called for Isaac softly from the back door, and he appeared, with the Sam’s trailing after him.