Camping

Daily writing prompt
Have you ever been camping?

Writing using the prompt from WordPress’s dashboard today, because the prompt cards I pulled require a little more thought – I have the feeling that there is something that can be quite cleverly funny, and I will completely miss my target even when I do write something, but we’ll see next Tuesday.

We used to camp a lot when I was a child. Between the ages of 4 and 13, my family lived in Oregon. We spent nearly every weekend out in the national forests, camping, fishing, or just driving through the mountains and stopping for cans and mushrooms near the road. We’d find a place near a creek or a river that was out in the middle of nowhere and pitch a tent and build a fire, and spend our time exploring the surrounding area. I remember three spots in particular:

The first was a semi-regular place for us to visit, sometimes just on daytrips to go fishing, though we did camp there a few times. It was less private, being known to other people – a stretch of sandy beach past the Painted Hills near the John Day River. The Painted Hills were so named because the dirt of the hill mounds were multi-colored, reds and pale tans and blacks, all running in striated streaks. I believe, though do not know for sure, that it was also an area where students in nearby universities would dig for fossils. The river was popular for rafting, and the small beach was a nice swimming spot, with a cliff on the other side that people liked to dive into. They used to mine for gold in the river, and gold flakes flecked the sands there – I’d spend time trying to separate out the tiny, glittery flakes from the rest of the sand. The beach wasn’t far from the road, but still a little troublesome to reach because of how steep the incline down to it was. There were a few trees at the edge that provided good shade, and a place to chase blue-bellied lizards while my parents fished for bass.

I don’t know the name of the second place. I don’t think it was unknown to people, but we rarely saw anyone there when we visited. It was a small reservoir, and not very deep so you could also fish for bass there. There was no gentle incline to it – straight at the edge of the water, it was immediately at least 4 feet deep. Once we took our cousins camping with us there, and my youngest cousin leaned too far over and fell into the water, and was shocked enough at the depth that she got very upset and was crying. There was a path that looped around it, and it could easily be walked around. Along one side of the dam, there was a small, shallow, stream that ran down an incline and into a valley below. Once, my brother and I caught a bass by hand because it happened to be stuck in that stream. I’m not sure how it had gotten there in the first place, the water was shallow enough that it’s top side was halfway out and exposed to the air, and it had been there long enough that the exposed bit was discolored, though it still had a lot of fight to it.

The third spot I remember was one we only visited once, but it was fairly similar to most of the others except for the stream. There was a mountain stream running through, a thin enough trickle of water to be able to step across in spots, but still a good home for trout. Most other spots maybe didn’t stand out because the creeks or rivers were wider, more typical fishing and camping spots. I’m not even sure if Dad knew it was there, or if we just happened to run into it while driving around and decided it was a good spot to camp. But I do remember it was a wonderful sunny day, and there was a green grassy meadow filled with wildflowers through the whole area.

I think camping then always stands out in my memory because it involved getting out and away from people and signs of people. Dad has mused before that these days he wouldn’t want to risk it again – being in a small tent overnight in land that belongs more to the bears and mountain lions and far from any help if something were to happen. But I always enjoyed it. There were other times when I went camping with grandparents, but those were at campsites near lakes, with cordoned off spots that you had to pay to stay at and public restrooms and showers and RV hookups. Fun, but in a different way.

After we moved, we didn’t go camping anymore. In part because my brother and I were teenagers, and also because of my parents’ new work schedules; we rarely had weekends together as a family anymore. But I also think in part because Dad had been born and raised in Oregon and knew where to get comfortably lost there. I’m sure there are places to go in Oklahoma, but the lands seem mostly private and fenced off, and the few places you can go are kind of known, so it’s not unusual to see other people once you get there.

No Place to Hide

I’ve decided I’m going to try to update on Tuesdays with writing shorts, either using the writing prompt questions that WordPress has available or using the Storymatic cards to prompt a short story. I’m not entirely following the official Storymatic rules – because let’s face it, it’s fun to break the rules. I’m pulling only a couple of cards because I don’t intend to get carried away – all of these stories or posts will be no longer than the average flash fiction. As such, I am pulling one character card and one story card each and running with those.

Today’s prompt includes the following cards: a world record holder, and no place to hide.


              Alice loved the water. She had taken to it like a fish since infancy, had specifically sought out a high school with a good swim team, but eventually found her own niche passion within competitive apnea. She had spent years training herself in freediving, both in pools and in the ocean, with one idea lodged firmly in her head: to break the Guiness World Record for holding one’s breath. As a woman, she had to pass the female record of 18 minutes and 32.59 seconds, but she desperately wanted to prove herself even against the men’s record.

              When she finally made the attempt, she fell short of the men’s record, but did still manage 21 minutes and 22.1 seconds under the water. She remembered the euphoric feeling of knowing that she would now be the goal – that anyone and everyone within her field of competition and interest would know her name, would know that she was the one to surpass. This was a triumph.

              That had been a year and a half ago. She still trained, though not with the same single-minded determination that had driven her before she had achieved her dream. Mostly she trained in case someone managed to break her record, and she relished in the idea of the challenge, but none had managed it so far. Like any other day, she decided to swim in the ocean, and had taken her boat out far from the shore.

              As she prepared for her dive, she scanned the horizon. The sea was calm, and it was a beautiful day, the sort of conditions that always made her feel at peace and in touch with her world. But today seemed somehow different. A strange unsettling began somewhere in the pit of her stomach and raised goosebumps across her flesh. But she had already come out this far and was certain that being in the water would make everything seem right again. Ignoring the feeling, she carefully placed her goggles over her eyes and slipped under the waves.

              She swam down, intending to go as deep as she was able, but the feeling persisted. Something was wrong here. She turned in the water, looking through the depths – the way the distance disappeared in greenish blue usually calmed her, but today it looked somehow darker, murkier. Foreign? Perhaps this was a bad idea after all. She decided to float upward to return to her boat.

              Strangely, her slow descent never seemed to bring her closer to the surface. She frowned, staring at what she felt was up, but it was hard to make out where the water might meet the sky. She quelled her panic and continued, but several moments later, much longer than the time she had taken swimming down, she still hadn’t broken the surface of the water.

              Movement caught her eye. She turned to look, could see a dark shape lurking just beyond comprehension. More movement, from the other side. Four glowing dots seemed to grow out of the gloom, approaching until she realized they were the eyes of some strange massive fish. The ocean was full of mysterious and terrifying things, but she had never seen anything quite like it before. More alarming, it seemed to be stalking her, waiting just out of reach for something to happen.

              She kept her eyes on it as she continued upward. There was nowhere to reasonably hide, and she didn’t want to thrash or panic like a prey animal – instead, she forced herself to keep her movements steady. Besides, despite her world record, or maybe entirely because of it, she knew she did not have much more time before she couldn’t hold her breath anymore. She nearly boggled at the sight of the second creature as it rose from the depths, this one with a white skeletal looking face full of sharp exposed teeth, a dull blue glow emitting from the depths of the eye sockets. What were these things? Where were they coming from?

              They followed her on her slow and completely exposed journey up.

              Her lungs ached and white flashes of light painfully pulsed behind her eyes, almost obscuring the sight of the third creature from the depths – a long flowing inky shadow of tendrils and arms lined with glowing lights of a color that she couldn’t place or even begin to understand, a color she could only describe as oceanic death. It was larger than the other two, both of which pulled back at its approach.

              Panic welling and building to a crescendo, she struggled hard, pulling her arms against the water and kicking, feeling her body rise quickly, but despite that, the surface still never came. She realized she was reaching her limit – had maybe even surpassed her own record. She was out of breath, and out of strength, and out of consciousness. The world darkened as the inky black of the creature surrounded her, and the last cohesive thought that crossed her mind was that she could just barely make out the glistening of pearly teeth…