Week 7 Post 4: The End

Storymatic cards were person in love and movie director for one of the characters, and end of the relationship and hiding spot is discovered for things that must appear in story.

I like the idea of this one but it’s botched and poorly written. You’re welcome?


It was a well-known fact that Vince Waggoner was in love with Robin Rose. When they met, she immediately became his primary muse. He cast her in five films in a row as the leading lady, claiming that the roles were written with her in mind. They were married quickly. People often spoke of how he worshipped the ground she walked on, gave her everything she could ever want.

They also whispered of her many infidelities.

It was a tabloid feeding frenzy when their marriage inevitably fell apart. He took a short break from directing, and a handful of years passed where people thought his career was over. Far from it – he emerged, revealing he had been painstakingly writing a story for a series of films. Films that he wanted to film back-to-back. He threw himself into his work with reckless abandon. There were a whopping seven films in total, set in the same universe with cameos from each of the other films, but completely unrelated except for their thematic ties.

It became immediately obvious that Robin Rose was still his muse. Each leading actress that he chose bore striking similarities to her. Similar face shapes, the same pale skin tone and wide doe eyes. A few were familiar household names, but many of them were new. It was no secret that he was going for a particular look. The movies were set to be released yearly.

The disappearances started after the third release.

Miss Lane was a tragedy. She had been a fresh face in Waggoner’s first film without Robin Rose, and with the success of that, her star had risen. She was in talks to join a major film franchise when she had disappeared. No one could locate her. She hadn’t mentioned leaving to anyone, did not reach out to any of her family or friends. Her car was found abandoned in a parking garage, her phone still inside. She had made no monetary withdrawals and hadn’t used any of her cards since her disappearance.

It was strange and sad and many people speculated what could have happened.

But it wasn’t until Candy Zacharias disappeared next that people suspected Waggoner. Candy was the lead of the second film, and she disappeared the year after Miss Lane. Still, there wasn’t enough reason to suspect a thing – until the following year, when Francine Queen disappeared.

The cops focused their investigation on Waggoner, but found nothing. He was so harangued by the media and the cops that he finally left the country. After all, he had finished the films, with only the last few remaining in post-production. It was recommended that the remaining actresses beef up their security teams. Still, Michelle Ray managed to escape her bodyguards briefly (supposedly in a discreet attempt to buy some illicit substance) and was never seen again. When warrants were issued allowing the cops to search all of Waggoner’s properties, nothing was found. He proclaimed his innocence in every interview, and eventually tired of the questions so much that he became a recluse.

Time passed. The remaining women didn’t disappear yearly as predicted, but as their security grew lax, they did eventually all disappear. Each time, investigations were made into Waggoner, and each time – nothing.

Eventually, he died of an overdose. It became a strange unsolved Hollywood legend.

Robin Rose died relatively young. A suicide. No one was sure why.

While her estate was being cleared, all seven desiccated corpses were found in her basement.

Week 7 Post 3: Greyspace

          Mallory woke slowly. She was in a very warm, very soft bed in a bright room. Her eyelids fluttered open – everything was white. At first she wondered if she was in a hospital but it was quiet and nothing about the décor suggested an overtly clinical setting. There was no smell of cleaners or chemicals. If it was a hospital, then it was a very fancy one and the room was private – a luxury she’d never be able to afford. Strangely, it reminded her of fictional elves in those old Lord of the Rings movies. Soft curtains caught on a breeze, and the faintest sound of faraway chatter caught her ears.

          She searched her mind, trying to remember what had happened. There were flashes of terror, and she could remember the shadow, and the pain – the pain of the knife entering her back. She placed a hand just over her hip, searching for the wound, but there was nothing. Yet she distinctly remembered the way everything had continued to burn even as the knife was drawn out to bite into her flesh thrice more. She winced just thinking about it. Had that been a strange dream?

          What had happened to Eliza? And the others? She remembered the house had exploded and collapsed in on itself, and she had almost been caught in a massive fire…

          Mallory pushed herself out of bed, surprised to find that she felt perfectly fine. She was in loose fitting white clothes, light and easy to move in. Lifting her shirt and twisting, she could see the faintest of scars – five marks. More than she had remembered. She felt a chill – how long had she been laying here to be this healed? “Hello?” she called out tentatively. She knew she should probably leave the room and try to find someone, anyone, that could tell her where she was and what had happened, but the sound of distant chatter drew her to the window again.

          The curtains were sheer and white, gently fluttering in the breeze, which was pleasantly warm. Mallory pushed them aside as she approached, looking down. She was shocked to find she was at a dizzying height – almost as though she were high up on a mountain. Sprawling out below was a city built into the side and base of the mountain. It reminded her of pictures of Rio de Janeiro, haphazardly placed buildings with many winding streets and alleys. Mallory blinked as she realized there were no cars or trucks below, although she could see people moving about their business.

Week 7 Post 2: Greyspace

          There was pain and sound and the sensation of being bodily lifted into the air and crashed in debris. For a disorienting heartbeat, Mallory wondered if she was back in that moment beneath the stairs. If everything that had happened since then had been some strange dream her dying mind had conjured. Her hearing was a soft buzz, shifting to a high squeal as the sounds of the world around her shifted back into focus. There was the crackling of fire and the creak of shifting wood. Fire!? Mallory gasped, trying to open her eyes, but she hurt all over and it took effort. She pushed something off, not bothering to identify what it had once been a part of. Debris.

          It was like a bomb had gone off a floor beneath them. She pushed herself to her feet, blinking up at the night sky where a roof had once been. Smoke curled into the air, burning her lungs. She could hear people shouting outside, could hear screaming somewhere nearby. Eliza. Eliza was screaming.

          And then the screaming stopped.

          Before she could fully grasp what was happening, arms gripped her tight and pulled her, shifting her into greyspace. She blinked, reorienting herself again, staring hard at flames that burst forth and engulfed her. She pulled back, gasping, but the flames were insubstantial, grey, passing over her like smoke. The sound of Eliza screaming returned.

          The arms helped her to stand. Looking up, she saw that it was Samanda steadying her. “What happened?” Mallory asked.

          “I’m not sure. We were asleep. Sampson should have been on watch.” She stepped back from Mallory, studying her carefully as she lifted her arms away, looking ready to grab her if she looked unsteady. Once she seemed satisfied that Mallory was fine by herself, she nodded and looked down into the hole. “Stay here,” Samanda commanded. She jumped down into the hole.

          Frowning, Mallory moved to the edge, looking down. Eliza’s cries cut out again. “Fuck that,” Mallory murmured to herself, trying to find an easy path down. After a moment, she recalled her previous time in greyspace and everything they had been told about it. She took a deep breath and allowed herself to slip into the flooring beneath her.

          When it happened, she could feel the floor passing through her. She gasped, wondering how Eliza had managed to walk through a wall. As she lost her focus, the floor lost it’s hold on her and she fell, flailing wildly with a shout of surprise. The ground floor caught her – she hit it, hard, a soft “oof!” escaping her lungs.

          But the damage hadn’t come from the ground floor. It went down further. “Oh for fuck’s sake,” she grumbled to herself. This time she decided to jump. Eliza’s house had a basement, and a nice one at that – Michael had used it as his teenaged escape den often. Mallory remembered that it had been furnished with an old couch with failing springs that was almost uncomfortable to sit in, a large TV and several gaming systems. He’d also had loads of board games, a table to play them at, and a mini fridge loaded with his favorite energy drinks and sodas. The basement was such a blown in mess that Mallory couldn’t tell if any of that stuff had been left untouched by his parents. She gaped at the ruins of the basement. What had caused this?

          She could see Samanda leaning down over Isaac’s body, and started to jog over to help when she caught sight of Eliza out of the corner of her eye. She was also sprawled on the ground, still in her pajamas, one arm up over her head as though she had tried to protect herself. Mallory turned on her heel, instantly moving toward her friend instead.

          Something like the shadow of a very tall man stepped forward. At first, Mallory wasn’t sure if it was even really there. Glinting silvery eyes shifted up, narrowing as it caught sight of her. Mallory felt that same chill from the Miller house – the absolute hatred in that gaze. Her steps almost faltered as it glared at her, and then its gaze shifted down to Eliza. A blade glinted in its hands, as silvery as the eyes. Mallory found herself bending into an all-out sprint as it regarded her friend. Not Eliza! The words shrieked through her brain. Without any hesitation, Mallory tackled the shadow.

          She half expected to simply dive through it, but it was surprisingly solid to the touch, and ice cold. She hissed as she felt the chill seep into her skin, her fingers freezing so badly that she felt like her nerve endings were on fire. It grunted softly at the impact, being pushed back a few steps but not going down. It looked down at her, pulling her closer, almost as though to hug her.

          Mallory had thought touching it was unpleasant, but it was nothing compared to the searing, almost soul-wrenching pain of the knife.

Week 7 Post 1: Unintentional

Have you ever unintentionally broken the law?

Unintentional instances of law breaking usually include theft. In general, I’m very respectful of other people’s property (I might hide something though, that’s maybe not super respectful, I guess) and I’ve always been financially lucky or stable enough that I’ve never felt the need to steal. I don’t really get any sort of thrill from such things as other’s might. I think perhaps the most egregious intentional thefts were some food and drinks while working at a fast food place as a teenager, which if you have worked food service, you know is fairly rampant. So the list is small and accidental:

Once pocketed a silver mercury dime at work intending to switch it out with a normal one from my car, but completely forgot it was in my pocket until I got home. Later, I did the same with a buffalo head nickel.

One year I decided to buy a nice big pot to try to grow some flowers in. I was quite unsuccessful, but kept trying every other year. At the end of one such unsuccessful season, after having owned the pot for about 5ish years, I emptied it and went to go rinse it out and it appeared to fall apart in my hands. Upon further investigation, I discovered it was actually two pots stuck together. I had only needed one, been convinced it was one, so had only paid for one. The inner one still had the barcode on the bottom. Whoops?

Also a semi-intentional one: we had a girl working in the pharmacy that would grab the occasional toy and leave it without buying it in the pharmacy. It was during the time that fidget spinners were really popular, so she had brought a nice hefty metal one in. It hung out in the pharmacy so long and had been messed with so much that it no longer had a barcode and we no longer even sold the item. We had to do a deep clean and remove a lot of clutter, so we were going to just throw it away. I decided to take it home instead.

A hardened criminal, indeed.

Week 6 Post 4: Revelation

Decided to pull some Storymatic cards and even decided to do it properly. So if done properly, you actually pull 4 cards to use for your prompts, and the character cards build your main character. The cards I pulled were “person with wings,” “person who should not be in charge,” “shocking announcement,” and “safety deposit box.”

I feel there is a lot that is kind of unsatisfying about it but it skewed a bit longer than I wanted to write. Not too bad for an hour’s plunking and 15 minutes of edits, I suppose. Anyhow, here’s some bullshit:


          Everyone thought he was special because he had wings. He was born with them – a strange modern miracle. Scientists wanted to study him but his mother would never allow it. They had noticed the strange wing-like appendages during the ultrasounds. She was single, very young, claimed it was a virgin birth and that there was no mortal father. That she had consorted only with angels. She began wearing clothes that resembled nun’s habits, preferring tones of black and purest white, and kept her hair covered. She kept her eyes downcast, her hands clasped gently in front. She spoke softly and smiled sweetly. Everyone that knew her before remembered something very different. But when your child is born with pure white wings, it is easy for those rumors to fall by the wayside.

          The religious fervor was instant. Passionate preachers and pastors, some from very renowned mega churches, instantly hailed the child as divinely significant. The messiah, the second coming, the king of kings. She traveled often, so that his followers could see him in person. The pictures of his infancy always reflect this – a bundled babe, held in the arms of a girl that seemed much too young, with hands reaching to touch his holiness. His mother always smiled, always seemed to have eyes only for him, like a painting of the Mother Mary. The onlookers and true believers gasped and cried tears of joy to be in his presence.

          The more notorious pictures and videos were of his mother holding him on stage, his bare back facing the crowds. Sometimes his wings fluttered on their own. Sometimes someone else would hold the tip of one, spreading the span of it out for the crowd to see as the boy wriggled and cried.


          The less religious often wondered if it was a sign of a change in human genetics – a mutation, like out of a comic book origin story. But there was a distinct lack of other examples. Even as the years passed and he aged, grew from infancy to childhood, there were no other winged babes. Scientists pleaded and begged for a chance to take a little bit of blood or a swab of saliva, but his mother always refused. She also refused media visits and interviews. She kept him secluded, in the mansion of one particular pastor who she held in high regard. He was home schooled. He was not allowed internet access, and his mother had expunged most of her own social media history, deleted every account across every platform. People were paid to silence old tales of her life before his birth. It was a wonder what could be cleared away with money. What he was taught, what he thought, what he might share with the world could only be guessed at. But the true believers waited patiently, knowing only that it would be great.


          The years passed and he was mostly forgotten, locked away in that mansion. The especially favored amongst his flock were allowed to visit, though they were suspiciously wealthy and it was suspected they paid their way in. They signed NDAs for the privilege and never spoke to anyone of what they saw or heard during their time in the mansion. He was supposedly hale and hearty, kind, and well educated. What little was shared with the public was that when he was of age, he intended to make strides in leadership positions. That he would change the world.

          His 18th birthday came and passed with no change. The world still saw and heard very little directly from him, beyond the occasional picture of a pale, dark haired youth in bulky cloaks. There was the occasional rumor in the town near the mansion of a winged man flying overheard, but those often proved to just be tall tales. He was so rarely seen that many believed him to be dead. The media and the scientists made fewer and fewer requests to meet with him and even his church of true believers grew smaller. Many joked amongst themselves – so much for the messiah. So much for a new leader.


          When he turned 37, it was announced that he would be running for president of the United States that year. His true believers rejoiced, but everyone else was shocked. He had never held any political office, had never had a job, had never attended a school. He had never even spoken in public. Was he even remotely prepared for such an important role?

          The political rallies were even worse – they were secluded and private affairs. They didn’t allow media coverage, which seemed to go against good sense. How could people vote for a candidate that wasn’t getting his words out to the public? There were pictures of him flooding the internet and the media now, and the people that attended the rallies spoke with delirious devotion to him. He was handsome – tall, with a well chiseled jaw and striking sky-blue eyes. He had well coifed jet-black hair. He was thin, almost waifish.

And the wings. Brilliant white wings.

          His tailored suits were cut to allow the full spread of his wings. It certainly made him appear angelic. And it turned out they weren’t just for show, because he could fly. He flew at every rally. His mother and the pastor seemed to be all the voice he needed. Those that attended these private rallies spoke very little about his policies or his politics. His true believers cried with joy as they spread the word of what wonderful changes he would make for the world, and many other devoted religious individuals found themselves swayed by the possibility.

          His popularity rocketed, even amongst non-believers, who simply enjoyed the spectacle. Many liked the idea of a strange third-party candidate that was somehow trouncing the usual two picks. He smiled handsomely enough from magazine covers and social media memes to win over frivolous hearts.

          He won the presidency in a landslide. A first for a third-party candidate.


          Nobody thought there would be any harm. After all, if he was a good person, he would try his best and possibly even get a little good done. And if he was ineffectual, then certainly the system of checks and balances in place would keep him from fudging the entire thing too badly. And many suspected that a strange and mutated societal cut-off would be nothing but that – completely ineffectual. A joke of a presidency, during which time nothing might change, but at least nothing bad would happen. At worst, the world would laugh at them a little and things would go on as they always had.

          Nobody suspected that he would purposely set out to dismantle and destroy it all.


          The survivors studied it for years after. It was hard to find the favored that had signed NDAs, hard to find the tutors that might have taught the boy before he was the man that ruined the world. It was hard to find a reason for WHY, though it was a question often on everyone’s minds. As those that remained rebuilt the world piece by piece from it sundering, they had few answers. His life, his origins, his entire being was a mystery.

          One day, while sifting through the remains and records of a bank, a young historian found a safety deposit box listed as belonging to the mother. With great care, he opened it, hands trembling. Whatever he found inside would be historically significant. Even if it was nothing, but he hoped for an answer – finally an answer.

          Inside was a single slip of paper. He unfolded it. A strange script scrawled across the paper in a language he could not read. The letters glowed strangely bright as if lit within by the fires of hell, and before his very eyes the script faded – along with his vision. As he cried out for help, he dropped the paper, though it held very little of interest anymore. His colleagues found only a mostly blank page. Remaining at the bottom was the signature of the mother.